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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on March 11, 2013, 12:21:54 pm

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Post by: RSL on March 11, 2013, 12:21:54 pm

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Post by: amolitor on March 11, 2013, 08:54:37 pm

I love this! It's so spare and graphical, and every element is fun.

My favorite moment was finding the YOU, but I like the poster echoed in the stand-up menu, and the guy writing the next great american novel under the light.

It feels like there ought to be some great F. Scott Fitzgerald theme running through this, if only I were more literate. I doubt there is, but it feels like there is and feeling is everything, eh?

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Post by: GEOFFREYJAMES on March 14, 2013, 05:15:40 pm

Good photograph.  I can't believe to what extent people have become wedded in a relatively short to screens of various sizes.  There is a good subject here in the new weapons of mass distraction,  where corporations  like Google,  who I find a bit sinister,  are occupying more and more people's head space. 

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Post by: Rob C on March 14, 2013, 05:26:31 pm

Very graphic, sparse yet pointed.

Now, if Tina could come in doing the walk from the right...

;-)

Rob C

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Post by: RSL on March 14, 2013, 07:21:11 pm

We'll keep watching and keep our fingers crossed, Rob.

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Post by: 32BT on March 17, 2013, 08:10:56 am

Very nice. All elements play well together. "Street" at its finest. Would possibly try some postprocessing to get more depth in the rendition, but for pictorial content it stands firmly on its on.

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Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on March 17, 2013, 08:55:47 am

One of your best I've seen, Russ.
And no, I won't suggest cropping out anything.

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Post by: David Eckels on March 18, 2013, 07:58:46 pm

Oh yeah!