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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Bob_B on December 31, 2012, 09:39:15 am

Title: St. Mark at sunset
Post by: Bob_B on December 31, 2012, 09:39:15 am

The symmetry and colors caught my eye. Your thoughts for improvements are appreciated. Thanks.

Title: Re: St. Mark at sunset
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on December 31, 2012, 12:41:27 pm

Quote from: Bob_B on December 31, 2012, 09:39:15 am

The symmetry and colors caught my eye. Your thoughts for improvements are appreciated. Thanks.

It's attractive and simple, with pleasing light. I'd get rid of the power lines on the left.

Jeremy

Title: Re: St. Mark at sunset
Post by: WalterEG on December 31, 2012, 02:50:41 pm

Very nice and made especially so by the toppling cross slightly breaking the rigidity.