Title: Re: Form
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on December 16, 2012, 12:25:58 pm
Form echoing form in both of them. Nice!
Title: Re: Form
Post by: Rob C on December 16, 2012, 01:00:03 pm
Hi Jennifer,
Unusually, this time I prefer your landscape. The second shot just looks a mess to me.
Sorry, but there you go.
Rob C
Title: Re: Form
Post by: amolitor on December 17, 2012, 06:00:15 pm
These are both very nice.
The second one's a bit disconcerting, since it's a disaster as a "picture of a girl" but as an exercise in form it's quite nice, and it has a little touch of naughty and erotic thrown in, which kind of conflicts with the "this is not a picture of a girl but an exercise in form".
Suffice it to say, my reaction to the second one is complex, but overall I quite like it.
The first one is nice, but not complex at all, and I find it more of a good example of an overdone form without much new to say. But, still nice to look at and very very pleasing.
Title: Re: Form
Post by: Bruce Cox on December 17, 2012, 07:45:25 pm
I more or less agree with amolitor. Another possible title for the second one is Personal Space. I like how the bench and wall , etc., seem one with the picture plane and or frame. She helps by alining her leg with the edge and putting her head tangent to it. Or did you do that.