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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Riaan van Wyk on December 09, 2012, 04:21:12 am

Title: 9/12/12
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on December 09, 2012, 04:21:12 am

Thoughts please?

Title: Re: 9/12/12
Post by: Bruce Cox on December 09, 2012, 10:02:00 am

You are getting good at this impossibly ambitious scene.  This is the best fore ground I can remember.        Nevertheless, at the risk of seeming glib, I suggest, instead of darkening the wood where it is against the sky, color it a fairly saturated international orange there.  As it is, the darkened wood is making it difficult for the space behind to recede to the appropriately cosmic dimensions.

Bruce   

Title: Re: 9/12/12
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on December 12, 2012, 02:32:11 am

Thanks for looking Bruce.