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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: -Tom- on December 02, 2012, 02:23:39 pm

Title: Lone 3
Post by: -Tom- on December 02, 2012, 02:23:39 pm

Driving home today, I was on the lookout for the lone tree because I already had the image I wanted in my mind...here it is.

(http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8348/8239038314_7420154d19_o.jpg)

Title: Re: Lone 3
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on December 02, 2012, 03:02:48 pm

This looks like cropped already... any chance there is a tiny little bit more at the bottom? Just needs a bit of stability and a sense of foundation there. Otherwise, very nice.

Title: Re: Lone 3
Post by: RSL on December 02, 2012, 03:22:48 pm

I agree with Slobodan on both points. It's a very fine shot and it needs more weight on the bottom.

Title: Re: Lone 3
Post by: -Tom- on December 02, 2012, 03:42:36 pm

Here it is...this is my wallpaper, i added a bit grain because the plain white is killin me :D

I hope the goshawk sitting on the right side of the tree is visible :D

(http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8478/8239291900_5ed21d3f88_o.jpg)


PS I really like this photo and the way it turned out, I'm gonna get it framed, I need it on my wall

Title: Re: Lone 3
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on December 02, 2012, 06:54:29 pm

Definitely worth framing.

Title: Re: Lone 3
Post by: wolfnowl on December 02, 2012, 09:06:53 pm

Could do without the grain, but adding a bit to the bottom works very well.  Can`t see the goshawk in such a small image; will have to take your word for it!

Mike.

Title: Re: Lone 3
Post by: -Tom- on December 03, 2012, 02:01:00 am

Its noticeable in full res - http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8478/8239291900_5ed21d3f88_o.jpg

you'll see it on the top right side of the tree :)