Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: seamus finn on December 02, 2012, 07:45:27 am
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Not my usual thing - this scarf display caught my eye on a street stall. I love the position of the safety pin on the right edge. Any thoughts?
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A good catch. And the safety pin is a fine detail.
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I think you show them well. However, the edge of the bamboo against the wall on the right might be tweaked up.
Bruce
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When I looked at this earlier, I thought perhaps they were a bit flat but now they seem better...I am kind of wishy-washy today.
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I like it very much! Colors are vibrant but pleasing…
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That's looking, Seamus. A truly fun shot.
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I'm not particularly convinced that the safety pin helps. However, I am intrigued by the fact that the one on the left is knotted differently from the others. Nice shot.
Jeremy
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Yeah, Jeremy, the odd knot makes it I think, while the safety pin is a quirky detail that, for me, completes the thing with its own dash of colour thrown into the mix via the purple tag.