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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Roberto Frieri on November 11, 2012, 04:34:16 am

Title: Women in the autumn
Post by: Roberto Frieri on November 11, 2012, 04:34:16 am

Some shots from my last portfolio.
The portfolio is made of 18 images: http://www.robertofrieri.net/womenintheautumn.html
Hope you like it.
As always, I would be extremely grateful for any critic or advice.

Title: Re: Women in the autumn
Post by: kencameron on November 11, 2012, 04:55:21 am

Nice ladies and interesting angles. I found the backgrounds more or less distracting in all of them - not so much in the third - and the large whitish area in the front left of the first also distracting.

Title: Re: Women in the autumn
Post by: RSL on November 11, 2012, 03:48:45 pm

It's a cute bunch of girls, Roberto, but I have to agree with Ken about #1. Unlike Ken I find the background in #4 even more distracting than the backgrounds in the other three. Also, in #4, I'd dodge the girl's eyes to a brighter level. It almost looks as if somebody's punched her in both eyes.

Title: Re: Women in the autumn
Post by: Roberto Frieri on November 13, 2012, 02:21:11 am

Thank you Ken and Russ for your feedback.