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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Heizmann Media on October 21, 2012, 06:24:13 am

Title: Silhouette at Night
Post by: Heizmann Media on October 21, 2012, 06:24:13 am

Hey all,

shot this yesterday.
what do you think?

You may take a look at https://www.facebook.com/heizmannmedia (https://www.facebook.com/heizmannmedia) Thanks.

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-f-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/559634_438335929556505_1128519757_n.jpg)

Title: Re: Silhouette at Night
Post by: WalterEG on October 21, 2012, 06:30:25 am

I like it very much in very many ways.

Title: Re: Silhouette at Night
Post by: Seoonmie on October 24, 2012, 02:27:10 pm

Hi, it's a very nice effort in my opinion, but something is missing. The overall idea is very good. However, the sky could do with a bit more dramatic lighting. Maybe a stronger contrast could help? Also, I don't like the distracting city (?) lights to the left.

Title: Re: Silhouette at Night
Post by: francois on October 25, 2012, 06:07:58 am

Quote from: Seoonmie on October 24, 2012, 02:27:10 pm

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However, the sky could do with a bit more dramatic lighting. Maybe a stronger contrast could help? Also, I don't like the distracting city (?) lights to the left.

I agree with this comment, my eyes don't seem to notice the sky. It's also true that the bright city lights on the left tend to draw too much attention, in my opinion.