Luminous Landscape Forum
Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: MTGFender on July 21, 2012, 10:42:25 pm
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Nikon D800E and Nikon 70-200mm VRII
Thanks friends for your interest.
Pramote
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Love this image except for the bright band of sky which really distracts me from the rest of the image.
Steve Nelson
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I also love everything about this except for the band of sky at the top. It distracts from the mood and everything else about the image.
Les
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I agree broadly with the sentiments so far.
Toning down the highlights could make this image a winner.
Regards
Tony Jay
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I also agree with the previous comments. To me, it looks like two different images put together.
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Thanks friends for your comments.
How about this new version?
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My comment about the highlights was just that - not just the sky, but the bright foreground as well.
The contrast between the sky and the foreground is even more unnaturally extreme now unfortunately.
I still think this is a good image with real potential though.
Regards
Tony Jay
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Very nice atmosphere.
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The highlights near the top and bottom are just fine.
To create a more stable, unified 'mood', I'd try and actually lighten up the clouds/fog near the top. They're nearly black in my monitor.
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I like foggy scenes and this is a good example of the genre. I think the composition shows the changing conditions at the time very nicely.
The only change I’d try is to remove the buoy on the right and see if that makes a difference. My eye is drawn to it. Other than that, it's a good composition and capture.
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Nice... but then I see this almost every day!! ;D
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Nice... but then I see this almost every day!! ;D
Lucky you!!! There is no doubt, Maine is one of the most beautiful states.
Thanks friends for your thoughtful comments.
Pramote
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Seems it takes you guys to remind me of what I have all around me!!
When I lived in Nj, I used to come up here all the time for just that image, but now that I live here, i se it all the time and I forget to stop and enjoy it!
Will do this weekend.
Stay thirsty, my friend!
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I am glad I've motivated you!
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I complete disagree with the toning down of the highlights. Well done, my Pemaquid lighthouse friend. ;)
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Thanks very much!
I know who you are, my friend!!!
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Ido like the second image. Definitely toning down the sky a bit helps and I'd leave the image alone. The "brighter" foreground lighting adds to the mood.
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Love this image except for the bright band of sky which really distracts me from the rest of the image.
Steve Nelson
i loved the first picture it is a great scene in a great location
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Thanks Rich and Steve! I like both versions but prefer the 1st one a little more.
Pramote