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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Robert Brummitt on February 26, 2012, 11:13:59 am

Title: Watered blown down grass, Beaverton OR
Post by: Robert Brummitt on February 26, 2012, 11:13:59 am

I originally made this as a vertical color image then changed it to B&W. Made one 8.5x11 then placed it horizontal. I like the flow it gives from left to right verses top to bottom.

Title: Re: Watered blown down grass, Beaverton OR
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on February 26, 2012, 12:45:04 pm

Its a pleasing image. However, the vertical stalk in the upper centre of the frame grabs my attention and won't let go.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Watered blown down grass, Beaverton OR
Post by: shutterpup on February 26, 2012, 10:03:42 pm

I would have made a diagonal out of it  :)

Title: Re: Watered blown down grass, Beaverton OR
Post by: wolfnowl on February 27, 2012, 01:57:18 am

Quote from: kikashi on February 26, 2012, 12:45:04 pm

Its a pleasing image. However, the vertical stalk in the upper centre of the frame grabs my attention and won't let go.

Jeremy

I agree.  It's very incongruent with the rest of the image. Not to say it's a bad thing, only that it seems out of place and thus draws the eye.

Mike.

Title: Re: Watered blown down grass, Beaverton OR
Post by: jalcocer on February 27, 2012, 08:31:54 am

nice image, and for me, it guides me to the top right