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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on November 13, 2011, 08:06:30 am

Title: twig
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 13, 2011, 08:06:30 am

Comments?

Jeremy

Title: Re: twig
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on November 17, 2011, 02:32:26 pm

For me, a tighter composition on the trees would have worked better Jeremy. The detail I would like to see on them is too subtle.

Title: Re: twig
Post by: Farmer on November 17, 2011, 06:15:10 pm

The angles work for me, although I'm wondering if a square presentation would help to accentuate those lines?

Also, the plants on the right with the white tops are a little distracting from what to me is all about the lines and angles - too bright.

Overall, though, I find it interesting and it draws me in.