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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Michael West on October 06, 2011, 05:53:28 pm
Title:
Twin Flower Monotone
Post by:
Michael West
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October 06, 2011, 05:53:28 pm
(http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6168/6214225225_1608bcaeb1_z.jpg)
(http://www.flickr.com/photos/41811370@N02/6214225225/)
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Re: Twin Flower Monotone
Post by:
Slobodan Blagojevic
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October 06, 2011, 06:28:55 pm
Rather pleasing. I do find the two flowerless stems kind of distracting though.
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Re: Twin Flower Monotone
Post by:
Michael West
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October 07, 2011, 10:15:10 am
no stems
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Re: Twin Flower Monotone
Post by:
Jeremy Roussak
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October 07, 2011, 12:14:49 pm
Quote from: Michael West on October 07, 2011, 10:15:10 am
no stems
Much improved, I think.
Jeremy
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Re: Twin Flower Monotone
Post by:
Eric Myrvaagnes
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October 07, 2011, 01:44:17 pm
Quote from: kikashi on October 07, 2011, 12:14:49 pm
Much improved, I think.
Jeremy
I agree. The new version is more conventionally "pretty," but the two flower-less stems didn't really add enough to the original to keep them.
Eric
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Re: Twin Flower Monotone
Post by:
wolfnowl
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October 07, 2011, 05:23:23 pm
I agree. Nicely done!
Mike.
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Re: Twin Flower Monotone
Post by:
Michael West
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October 08, 2011, 12:35:06 am
thank you.