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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Chairman Bill on May 13, 2011, 02:33:45 pm

Title: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on May 13, 2011, 02:33:45 pm
I've never really been a photographer of flowers, but just recently started shooting a few. I'm going to start posting some here, in the hope of constructive feedback to improve my photography in this area. I'm quite happy for this to turn into a Flower Thread, à la the ones elsewhere on clouds & trees, so if others want to post their flowers here too, that's fine with me.

I'd like to kick off with a shot of a rose

Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 13, 2011, 05:18:04 pm
Nicely done, Bill. I wish the stuff in the lower left wasn't there, though. It's just distracting.

Jeremy
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: shutterpup on May 13, 2011, 05:37:04 pm
Nicely done, Bill. I wish the stuff in the lower left wasn't there, though. It's just distracting.

Jeremy

My first thought too.
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on May 13, 2011, 06:42:30 pm
I could maybe clone it out, though I generally try to avoid doing such things (dust spots aside). Or maybe a square crop?
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: candide on May 13, 2011, 08:13:07 pm
I could maybe clone it out, though I generally try to avoid doing such things (dust spots aside). Or maybe a square crop?
Leave the crop as it is. The negative space gives the flower a presence it wouldn't posses within a tight crop.
Considering that the area in question is an isolated area, in the corner of the frame and easily deletable, I think you can get rid of it without feeling like you've cheated. I would.
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: wolfnowl on May 14, 2011, 02:11:52 am
I agree, and if you don't feel right about 'cloning' it out, just create a mask to lower the luminosity in that area!  Dimming it out is just removing the light - later...

Mike.
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on May 14, 2011, 04:51:50 am
Cloning worked a treat, and you were right about cropping, so I've left that alone. Thanks for the comments.
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: popnfresh on May 14, 2011, 09:44:58 am
Cloning worked a treat, and you were right about cropping, so I've left that alone. Thanks for the comments.
Let's see!
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on May 14, 2011, 10:31:14 am
Let's see? Lack of imagination? OK. Yer tiz

Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: degrub on May 14, 2011, 10:52:35 am
Nice. i also like the slight increase in contrast.
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Rocco Penny on May 14, 2011, 10:59:23 am
Hello
just a beginner so bear with me-
I would rather be a flower than a pig-
sounds like a vetoed line from a simon & garfunkle tune yes?
here's my two current favorites
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on May 14, 2011, 12:22:56 pm
Bluebells! Used to be the bane of my life (I exaggerate slightly); impossible to get the colour right on Fuji or Kodachrome. Digital at last made it possible to get the colour right - blueish-purple not just purple. That said, I prefer the look of your bluebells to mine.

Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: shutterpup on May 14, 2011, 12:31:47 pm
Bluebells! Used to be the bane of my life (I exaggerate slightly); impossible to get the colour right on Fuji or Kodachrome. Digital at last made it possible to get the colour right - blueish-purple not just purple. That said, I prefer the look of your bluebells to mine.



Sorry to disagree with you Bill. I much prefer yours. Rocco's strike me as too saturated and the whole scene somewhat unnatural. But then, what do I know ;)
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Rocco Penny on May 14, 2011, 12:52:15 pm
mine aren't bluebells,
they're lupines
so are these
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: ChrisS on May 15, 2011, 01:46:12 pm
Bill

I really like your photograph. I'm not sure which version I prefer, but I know I'd go for the darker ground if it was mine.

Like you, I don't normally do flowers, but below is one I did of my daughter's latest collection...
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on May 29, 2011, 04:22:22 pm
This is a photo of some Aqualegia's, though clearly not of the 'Granny's Bonnet' variety. I saw this as a B&W, and the potential to mimic those photos of fireworks exploding in the sky

Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on June 14, 2011, 02:49:09 pm
Not a traditional flower photo
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 14, 2011, 08:53:11 pm
Not a traditional flower photo

Not traditional, but very effective, Bill!

Eric
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Michael West on June 17, 2011, 12:36:58 am

(http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5091/5467480262_ee78b7df44_z.jpg)
 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/41811370@N02/5467480262/)
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Chairman Bill on June 17, 2011, 02:52:42 am
That's a very neat & effective composition
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 17, 2011, 09:46:12 am
That's a very neat & effective composition
Ditto.
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: louoates on June 17, 2011, 10:55:53 am
Michael,
your shot has qualities that I think most photographers should strive for. Sure, it's a flower of sorts but the graphic treatment sets it apart from most traditional, and boring, shots of the same subject. It passes my subjective criteria of something I haven't seen before. I enjoyed looking at it and thinking that the camera club judge would say "doesn't much look like a (insert flower name) to me".
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Rob C on June 17, 2011, 12:01:56 pm
Michael,
your shot has qualities that I think most photographers should strive for. Sure, it's a flower of sorts but the graphic treatment sets it apart from most traditional, and boring, shots of the same subject. It passes my subjective criteria of something I haven't seen before. I enjoyed looking at it and thinking that the camera club judge would say "doesn't much look like a (insert flower name) to me".


Some of you guys should look at more books or shows; those flowers, and pretty much in that way, have been done to death by every 'name' in the business since the year dot. Even the world's most celebrated pornographer had to do it!

Rob C
Title: Re: Flower photos
Post by: Michael West on June 17, 2011, 11:49:12 pm
Thank you. I figure that a few points of view  that intrigue me will hopefully engage and or intrigue others


(http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2739/4053496417_7c5565d627_o.jpg)
 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/41811370@N02/4053496417/)