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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: cmi on October 27, 2010, 09:55:26 am

Title: 2x bw
Post by: cmi on October 27, 2010, 09:55:26 am
Comments and critique apprectiated.
Title: Re: 2x bw
Post by: Dick Roadnight on October 27, 2010, 10:55:04 am
Hi...

The vertical pic looks muddy until I blew it up to 100% ...but there is detail almost everywhere, but, on my (calibrated) monitor it still looks a little dark (it looks a perfect on the laptop screen... do you have a calibrated monitor?)

The Horizontal pic looks good, but the eye is lead into the mist. Mist can be photogenic if you can see beyond it - it can help give a sense of depth to a picture.
Title: Re: 2x bw
Post by: wolfnowl on October 27, 2010, 11:21:21 am
I imagine these would both look great as large prints.

Mike.
Title: Re: 2x bw
Post by: popnfresh on October 27, 2010, 07:40:37 pm
Christian, I think your tonal balance looks great the way it is. The low values are holding enough detail on my monitor. And I'd keep your crop in #2. From the standpoint of composition, I prefer #1.

Bruce, I think you've lightened the photo too much. The blacks now look gray. Perhaps your monitor isn't capable of displaying a wide enough grayscale range.
Title: Re: 2x bw
Post by: Bruce Cox on October 27, 2010, 08:46:27 pm
Christian, I think your tonal balance looks great the way it is. The low values are holding enough detail on my monitor. And I'd keep your crop in #2. From the standpoint of composition, I prefer #1.

Bruce, I think you've lightened the photo too much. The blacks now look gray. Perhaps your monitor isn't capable of displaying a wide enough grayscale range.
   I'm sorry, I didn't mean to touch the grays.  I'll take it down, if can.  Bruce
Title: Re: 2x bw
Post by: cmi on October 29, 2010, 02:11:32 pm
Thank you all for your comments.

The first is my favourite, too.

The high blacklevel is intentional.

The second has enough flesh for a 2m / 6,5feet (horizontal) print.

First testprint looks already good :)