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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: spbimages on April 20, 2010, 07:36:03 pm

Title: Ft. Stevens Oregon
Post by: spbimages on April 20, 2010, 07:36:03 pm

Just a few shots from Ft. Stevens Oregon.

Comments welcome,
Steve

[attachment=21636:shipreck.jpg][attachment=21637:stairs.jpg][attachment=21638:wi
ndow.jpg]

Title: Ft. Stevens Oregon
Post by: deeyas on April 21, 2010, 12:27:10 am

In the first image, maybe a longer exposure to blur the water surface might make it more interesting?
In the second image, I found some dodge-n-burn made it a bit more dramatic.
The third image didn't hold my attention.

Hope this helps  

Title: Ft. Stevens Oregon
Post by: RichardGilbert on April 21, 2010, 12:38:17 am

Ya not a fan of the third. I really liked the first one though. What exactly is it? A building that was constructed to close to the water? Really an epic place!

Title: Ft. Stevens Oregon
Post by: spbimages on April 21, 2010, 04:42:06 pm

Thanks for the comments. The picture at the ocean is the Peter Iredale that was wrecked in 1906 on the Oregon coast.

Title: Ft. Stevens Oregon
Post by: spbimages on April 21, 2010, 04:47:16 pm

Thanks. I'll try that again also.