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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RobReuthal on January 24, 2010, 11:32:35 am

Title: Curves
Post by: RobReuthal on January 24, 2010, 11:32:35 am

From today , it was rainy and so I shoot in a parking block    
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Title: Curves
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on January 24, 2010, 12:10:47 pm

I like it except I'm missing something breaking up the scheme, like a person looking over the reling or an ostrich walking by.

Title: Curves
Post by: francois on January 24, 2010, 12:16:15 pm

Quote from: RobReuthal

From today , it was rainy and so I shoot in a parking block    
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Rob,
I love your curves. The red railing is very pleasing and adds some color to an almost monochromatic image.

Title: Curves
Post by: Colorwave on January 24, 2010, 12:28:56 pm

Nicely framed.  A very good architectural shot with lots of dynamic lines.  I can see how you may not have had the time to wait for an ostrich, though.  Many parking garages don't allow them.

Title: Curves
Post by: SandroD on January 25, 2010, 07:02:01 pm

mesmerizing curves!

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Post by: wolfnowl on January 26, 2010, 02:27:36 am

Well done!  Love the red.

Mike.

Title: Curves
Post by: John R on January 26, 2010, 09:14:38 am

I do somewhat like the image because it is well seen and exposed. But I don't think it is quite visually balanced. IMO, the entire bottom curve should be included in the frame to strike a balance with the rest of the image and the other two curves, creating a kind of visual rhythm. The bottom red railing, though striking, does not have enough visual weight to balance the bottom third of the image with the top two thirds.

JMR

Title: Curves
Post by: RobReuthal on January 27, 2010, 05:44:31 am

Thanks for feedback and suggestion, I´ll have it in my mind at next shooting