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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Patricia Sheley on October 30, 2009, 12:17:52 am

Title: Along buck trail through the beaver marsh...
Post by: Patricia Sheley on October 30, 2009, 12:17:52 am

Working our way through the beaver marsh here at Hawk's Table while backtracking a buck trail we came upon these...I went back later in the evening with my camera to bring back a few frames before the severe storm hit...hope to find they survived the high waters when I hike back there tomorrow...other eyes impressions/ thoughts/ critique welcome...

(http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk219/psheleyimages/20091027_logfungi_0014copy.jpg)

Title: Along buck trail through the beaver marsh...
Post by: PeterAit on October 31, 2009, 10:09:19 am

Quote from: psheleyimages

Working our way through the beaver marsh here at Hawk's Table while backtracking a buck trail we came upon these...I went back later in the evening with my camera to bring back a few frames before the severe storm hit...hope to find they survived the high waters when I hike back there tomorrow...other eyes impressions/ thoughts/ critique welcome...

(http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk219/psheleyimages/20091027_logfungi_0014copy.jpg)

I like the colors and the unusual point of view, but I must say that the out-of-focus sticks in the foreground really ruin it for me. Could you have moved those out of the way?