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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: jani on April 14, 2009, 05:57:24 pm

Title: Splash
Post by: jani on April 14, 2009, 05:57:24 pm

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Title: Splash
Post by: RSL on April 14, 2009, 06:07:20 pm

Quote from: jani

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Title: Splash
Post by: John R on April 14, 2009, 09:29:49 pm

I don't think it quite works for me, but I sure like your willingness to experiment. I think, in fact, if it weren't for the dominating streaks of light this would be a very interesting photo. Then we would see swirls of green, brown and white. But perhaps you wanted to play with the light?

JMR

Title: Splash
Post by: jani on April 19, 2009, 11:55:13 am

It looks like I may have fumbled the profile conversion on this one, as I'm now looking at it at another display.

The streaks of light are meant to be there, but the green and orange-golden colours ought to be more pronounced.

Thanks for the feedback.