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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Timo Löfgren on December 25, 2008, 12:21:23 pm

Title: End of the day
Post by: Timo Löfgren on December 25, 2008, 12:21:23 pm

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Title: End of the day
Post by: Chairman Bill on December 25, 2008, 12:36:02 pm

That's a nice shot. Caught the light just right

Title: End of the day
Post by: alainbriot on December 25, 2008, 01:13:12 pm

Timo,

What do you think of this version:

(http://beautiful-landscape.com/OPP/002-AB.jpg)

Here's the original for easy comparison:
(http://beautiful-landscape.com/OPP/002.jpg)


Alain

Title: End of the day
Post by: Chairman Bill on December 25, 2008, 02:15:03 pm

I'm going to have to ask him to look at some of my photos too  

Title: End of the day
Post by: Silver Birch Studio on December 25, 2008, 09:26:59 pm

I have to say, I'm usually impressed with Alain's processing finesse, but this time, I like the original the best. Beautiful work, Timo. Happy holidays, everyone!

Title: End of the day
Post by: wolfnowl on December 26, 2008, 03:00:37 am

When I looked at the original I thought it was well done but that the foreground could be lightened a bit.  Then I looked at Alain's and thought - maybe a bit too much!  Oh well, everyone gets an opinion!!

Mike.

Title: End of the day
Post by: dalethorn on December 26, 2008, 02:29:32 pm

This is an interesting photo - worth doing some work on.  Here's my quickie change/interpretation.  BTW I modified Alain's version.

Title: End of the day
Post by: Alex_B on December 27, 2008, 08:38:02 am

Nice colours and you caught just the right moment!

Did you also try a lower perspective? hat way you could have gotten even more of the foreground (compressed of course) plus more of the sky.

I prefer the original, but maybe I should not judge brightness on the poor laptop screen I am using right now.