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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Timo Löfgren on December 18, 2008, 12:41:44 pm

Title: Beach
Post by: Timo Löfgren on December 18, 2008, 12:41:44 pm
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Title: Beach
Post by: Dave Hall on December 18, 2008, 03:22:58 pm
Quote from: Timo Löfgren
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Very nice, I do like this.
If it were mine, I would clone out the very light area in the top left hand corner, it draws my eye away from the subject.

Title: Beach
Post by: button on December 18, 2008, 03:38:38 pm
Quote from: Dave Hall
Very nice, I do like this.
If it were mine, I would clone out the very light area in the top left hand corner, it draws my eye away from the subject.

Can you be more specific?  I like the composition, Timo.  The rocks look like alligator heads looking forward and to the left, toward the light.

John
Title: Beach
Post by: wolfnowl on December 19, 2008, 02:42:41 am
I think Dave is referring to the little pink patch on the left edge.  It's a bit distracting.  I love this kind of long exposure image where the waves look like mist...

Mike.
Title: Beach
Post by: geotzo on December 19, 2008, 04:13:55 am
I like it a lot. I do agree that the pink lighted area should go, but that's really up to you.
Would you be so kind and give us some specs of the shot?
George
Title: Beach
Post by: Timo Löfgren on December 20, 2008, 02:40:24 am
Quote from: button
Can you be more specific?  I like the composition, Timo.  The rocks look like alligator heads looking forward and to the left, toward the light.

John


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Timo Löfgren
Title: Beach
Post by: bretedge on December 20, 2008, 08:15:34 am
I enjoy the dark and foreboding mood of the image.  Excellent composition, nice subtle colors.  The luminosity of the FG rocks is excellent.