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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: mtnmanjc on December 12, 2008, 07:22:20 pm

Title: Mesa Verde Moon
Post by: mtnmanjc on December 12, 2008, 07:22:20 pm

Hey Everyone,

Here is a shot from Mesa Verde from a couple of months ago.

Mesa Verde Moon (http://mountain-man-photography.com/wordpress/?p=29)


Comments and Critiques are greatly appreciated!!

Thanks,
Joel

Title: Mesa Verde Moon
Post by: Silver Birch Studio on December 14, 2008, 12:04:52 am

Very cool framing, excellent capture. What time of day (or night!) was it? I really can't tell from the light...

Title: Mesa Verde Moon
Post by: mtnmanjc on December 15, 2008, 07:27:07 pm

It was just before dusk.

Title: Mesa Verde Moon
Post by: mtnmanjc on December 17, 2008, 09:17:44 pm

Any other comments or critiques??  Please be honest!!!!

Thanks,
Joel

Title: Mesa Verde Moon
Post by: Kirk Gittings on December 17, 2008, 10:19:11 pm

My two cents. I like the tonalities and the general idea. The thing you named this image after is pretty tiny. IE the moon. I would try straightening the perspective and enlarging the moon slightly. It think it would really pop then. Seriously. It looks too obviously wide angle to me as it is.