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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: deeyas on November 20, 2008, 06:24:55 pm

Title: Playing with LR2 --- Before/after image
Post by: deeyas on November 20, 2008, 06:24:55 pm

Love the new Lightroom! Here is an image I processed (along with original image in JPEG --- RAW available if anyone wants to try something).
Comments/suggestions about the composition are welcome!


www.sayeedmahmood.com

Title: Playing with LR2 --- Before/after image
Post by: wolfnowl on November 21, 2008, 02:25:17 am

I like the basic crop, although I'd remove the roofline at the bottom and clone out the flashing on the right.  As far as colours, etc. Lightroom has MANY different possibilities.  You have to find something you're comfortable with for each image...

Mike.

Some examples, using your original:

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Title: Playing with LR2 --- Before/after image
Post by: deeyas on November 21, 2008, 04:19:09 pm

Mike,
Thanks for your feedback! Cloning out the shiny metal part from the right side, does make it much better. I'm fairly new to LR, cloning it out hadn't even crossed my mind! I really like your first image; the window seems sharp and draws attention.

Sayeed

www.sayeedmahmood.com