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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Timo Löfgren on November 07, 2008, 04:09:37 am

Title: Icescape
Post by: Timo Löfgren on November 07, 2008, 04:09:37 am

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Title: Icescape
Post by: BernardLanguillier on November 07, 2008, 07:00:46 am

Amazing subject, great colors, proper DoF, the only problem for me is the position of the tree in the frame. Move it 30% to the left and you have a winner.

Cheers,
Bernard

Title: Icescape
Post by: dalethorn on November 07, 2008, 02:11:46 pm

Quote from: BernardLanguillier

Amazing subject, great colors, proper DoF, the only problem for me is the position of the tree in the frame. Move it 30% to the left and you have a winner.

Cheers,
Bernard

Or add something small for balance at the far left - a small bush or tree sticking out from behind the rock. Just a guess.

Title: Icescape
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 07, 2008, 03:21:26 pm

Quote from: BernardLanguillier

Amazing subject, great colors, proper DoF, the only problem for me is the position of the tree in the frame. Move it 30% to the left and you have a winner.

I agree. The tree isn't a feature but it can't be ignored; it's just there. The foreground is wonderful, though.

Jeremy

Title: Icescape
Post by: JDClements on November 07, 2008, 06:24:30 pm

Great subject, great photo. If there was *no* tree it would be like an alien landscape.

Title: Icescape
Post by: VIS on November 11, 2008, 12:47:30 am

Quote from: Timo Löfgren

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I agree with the other posts.  Is the horizon line straight?