Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Justinr on October 01, 2008, 05:17:50 pm
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A bit of a documentary here as well as being a first stab at doing my own HTML pages so there are one or two aspects I'm not over happy with.
Can't say it's particularly glamorous but it's the real thing-
Tipp Mart (http://justinseye.com/projects/tippmartpg1.htm)
Justin.
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A bit of a documentary here as well as being a first stab at doing my own HTML pages so there are one or two aspects I'm not over happy with.
Can't say it's particularly glamorous but it's the real thing-
Tipp Mart (http://justinseye.com/projects/tippmartpg1.htm)
Justin.
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I would change the opening images a bit. it is not clear from the beginning what you would like to document. I would suggest to look at a documentary film and see how the intro is handled to get some ideas how to start your gallery.
good luck
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A bit of a documentary here as well as being a first stab at doing my own HTML pages so there are one or two aspects I'm not over happy with.
Can't say it's particularly glamorous but it's the real thing-
Tipp Mart (http://justinseye.com/projects/tippmartpg1.htm)
Justin.
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Nice choice of subject matter, Justin. Good start!
Bruce
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Nice choice of subject matter, Justin. Good start!
Bruce
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Many thanks for the comments, I had feared being shot down somewhat, so I am encouraged. I will be changing a few of the images as one or two are not as strong as I thought and I have others which may be better suited.
It's intended as the beginning of an ongoing study of Tipperary Town and surrounding area. I'm afraid that many consider this part of Ireland as a bit behind the times and it is true that the full benefit of the Celtic tiger (RIP) was not enjoyed as much as it should have been. My hope is that this project will, in a very small way, help bring the place to a wider audience and fill in a little of the detail behind the song.
Justin.