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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: kwschang on January 07, 2007, 11:46:32 pm

Title: Foggy Morning
Post by: kwschang on January 07, 2007, 11:46:32 pm

First attempt at fog images.
Comments appreciated.
Thank you,
Ken

Title: Foggy Morning
Post by: wolfnowl on January 08, 2007, 03:36:36 am

I think it's got potential, it's just... can't quite put my finger on it...


Mike.

Title: Foggy Morning
Post by: larryg on January 08, 2007, 07:05:58 pm

I agree  There are some nice elements at work.  Perhaps it is the empty
right third (especially right hand side upper 2/3rds)

Maybe the tree centered in the image to totaly dominate the scene.

Title: Foggy Morning
Post by: howiesmith on January 08, 2007, 07:10:40 pm

I would crop out the foreground, about where the tree's reflection is in the water.

Title: Foggy Morning
Post by: David White on January 09, 2007, 01:30:52 am

I really want to like this image but my eyes keep getting drawn to the trees in the background.

Title: Foggy Morning
Post by: larryg on January 09, 2007, 10:53:25 am

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Well as we all know art is truely subjective.

I personally think the grass and reflection in the foreground give a good anchor and adds to the image.  
Just centering the main tree, while keeping the foreground should enhance the image and eliminate the distraction of the trees and the empty sky.

FWIW