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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: David Eckels on January 25, 2018, 09:39:00 am

Title: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 25, 2018, 09:39:00 am
C&C welcome
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: RSL on January 25, 2018, 09:51:06 am
Interesting shot, David. I suspect someone will object to the horizon being in the center of the picture, but I think it's right on here. There's a lot of rapeseed in that field.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on January 25, 2018, 12:21:58 pm
Love it.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: 32BT on January 25, 2018, 12:45:05 pm
What's the point of this image?

Not trying to be dismissive, just asking.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: sierraman on January 25, 2018, 02:29:56 pm
I like it too. Maybe try moving the horizon, maybe not.  :)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 25, 2018, 02:47:44 pm
What's the point of this image?

Not trying to be dismissive, just asking.


This is difficult to address without offending swathes of photographers, but as with all landscape, I'm left wondering where the hell the model went. Without her/him, there really is no overpowering reason for making an exposure unless for money.

Russ has pointed this out before, and he's right: interesting photographs are about people and their things. Remove either the human and/or signs of its creativity and we are looking at documentation, which may or may not be pretty - that is a matter of selection, opinion and luck. The best-lit tree on the brink of the Grand Canyon is still just a tree in a precarious spot on one of the biggest ditches in the world.

I think I'd better add one of these:   :-)




Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Peter McLennan on January 25, 2018, 02:52:47 pm
Love it.

Totally, Rajan. 

Rings clear to me.  Lovely image.

Rob can keep his scantily clad models. :)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: RSL on January 25, 2018, 03:05:45 pm

This is difficult to address without offending swathes of photographers, but as with all landscape, I'm left wondering where the hell the model went. Without her/him, there really is no overpowering reason for making an exposure unless for money.

Russ has pointed this out before, and he's right: interesting photographs are about people and their things. Remove either the human and/or signs of its creativity and we are looking at documentation, which may or may not be pretty - that is a matter of selection, opinion and luck. The best-lit tree on the brink of the Grand Canyon is still just a tree in a precarious spot on one of the biggest ditches in the world.

I think I'd better add one of these:   :-)

You know I'm going to agree with you, Rob, but if Andreas Gursky could sell Rhine II (http://www.tate.org.uk/art/images/work/P/P78/P78372_10.jpg) for 4.3 million, David ought to be able to sell this one for at least 5 million. David's colors are a lot better.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 25, 2018, 04:37:42 pm
Totally, Rajan. 

Rings clear to me.  Lovely image.

Rob can keep his scantily clad models. :)


Peter, I don't want them these days.

I was looking through the web tonight at a batch of snaps of Tina Louise whom I first knew of as a model with the Peters Basch and Gowland (ages before she made tv, movies or sang songs.) to mention but two greats of then. Breaking into the group of her pìx was another Tina Louise with the preface Miss. Tattoos and awfully over-developed top and seat, poses that would suit a dark corner somewhere in a poor part of town, I couldn't get them off my little iPad quickly enough. Today's pin-up leaves me cold. There are, apparently, no women doing it, only constructs with limited imagination of what a woman could be, working with snappers with minds and markets to match. It's done.

What I did and loved doing is no more. The closest thing lives on with some fashion spreads. I'd love to shoot fashion again.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: PeterAit on January 25, 2018, 05:07:23 pm
What's the point of this image?

Not trying to be dismissive, just asking.

Images don't have points. Pencils and knives have points.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 25, 2018, 06:07:53 pm
Images don't have points. Pencils and knives have points.
+1.

I love the image, too. And I'm glad the model walked off the set before the shutter was snapped.  :)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 25, 2018, 07:47:32 pm
What's the point of this image?

Not trying to be dismissive, just asking.
Dismissive is OK, Oscar, especially since I asked for C&C. I would guess that this image would leave some folks cold as well as a full ranging gamut from thereon. I take the points made by Rob and previously by Russ (not this time though). By the way, Rob, the model is there if you look carefully, but she and her parts were moving so vigorously that she blurred right out due to the slow shutter speed! ;)

But, Oscar, to answer your question I can only share with you what I was seeing and feeling at the time it was taken and processed to wit the featureless horizon and the complementary colors. It seemed to me a focus, pardon the pun, upon simplicity, complementarity, and juxtaposition. I chose deliberately to avoid the rule of thirds knowing that that might also add to the tension. That's it, really. It doesn't surprise me either that this would not work for some people, but the fact that it works for others is also appreciated.

For those of you that "know" me, this is not a typical image for me, which is why I posted it here. I have learned something; I always do, whether from silence or dismissive, affirmative, or technical comments. I also learn based on the degree to which I think I understand the commenters; I have had a lot of interaction with Russ, for example, and so I compute a weighted average if you want to think about it like that. Anyway, I appreciate any response; even silence speaks louder than words. That's the best I can do. I hope it is clear.

Also, Russ, if I make just one million on an image, I am going to buy each of you a PhaseOne with a BIG digital back and their best lens! If you already have one, just a D5 or D850 with the accessory grip! ;) ;) ;)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 25, 2018, 07:54:08 pm
What's the point of this image?

"I will try to speak of the beauty of shapes... straight lines and curves and the shapes made of them... They are not beautiful for any particular reason or purpose, as other things are, but are eternally, and by their very nature, beautiful, and give a pleasure of their own quite free from the itch of desire: and in this way colors can give a similar pleasure."

Socrates
(& Slobodan)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Peter McLennan on January 25, 2018, 08:14:39 pm

Peter, I don't want them these days...Today's pin-up leaves me cold... I'd love to shoot fashion again.

Don't blame you for missing fashion shoots. Arguably one of photography's most fertile fields. 
I recall lusting after Sarah Moon's work when first I discovered British Vogue. 
I, too lament the loss of velocity of those days. Maybe they'll return, driven by some kid with a photographic tool we've not yet seen

Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Alskoj on January 25, 2018, 10:53:15 pm
I like that the horizon is right down the center! 
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Richowens on January 26, 2018, 12:36:50 am
Rob,

 The hand of man is all over this one. The Canola didn't decide to grow in this field on its own, someone decided to plant here. Someone had to disturb the soil for the seeds to root. Someone had to spread the seeds. Someone had to pray for rain (and if you don't believe bless you anyway) to germinate the seeds. And the hand of man will have to harvest the crop.

My take on the subject,

Rich
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: GrahamBy on January 26, 2018, 04:08:33 am
"I will try to speak of the beauty of shapes... straight lines and curves and the shapes made of them... They are not beautiful for any particular reason or purpose, as other things are, but are eternally, and by their very nature, beautiful, and give a pleasure of their own quite free from the itch of desire: and in this way colors can give a similar pleasure."

Socrates
(& Slobodan)

What they said :)

Also : http://theonlinephotographer.typepad.com/the_online_photographer/2018/01/yellow-over-dark-blue.html
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 26, 2018, 04:14:16 am
Rob,

 The hand of man is all over this one. The Canola didn't decide to grow in this field on its own, someone decided to plant here. Someone had to disturb the soil for the seeds to root. Someone had to spread the seeds. Someone had to pray for rain (and if you don't believe bless you anyway) to germinate the seeds. And the hand of man will have to harvest the crop.

My take on the subject,

Rich



I take your point absolutely, Rich, but it's a different idea altogether.

Hand-of-man in a photographic context, to me, means his constructions such as bridges, roads, telegraph poles, cities, quaint old villages, abandoned buildings and so forth. Farmlands just merge into landscape, and there there are exceptions where both meet: the banks of a canal with trees marching down the side, shots like that can be evocative of both nature and mankind working together (or embatteled) but in this specific case, we are looking at two colour blocks that say nothing beyond the fact that they exists as two colour blocks. The HOM is so hidden as to match the fleeting model David suggested might have been present...

However, there is a whole school of painting that is/was dedicated to such images; perhaps this is photography's attempt to explore the same pasture? David would not claim to be the first snapper to try his hand at this form of expression. Thing is, photography ain't painting.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 26, 2018, 04:32:11 am
"I will try to speak of the beauty of shapes... straight lines and curves and the shapes made of them... They are not beautiful for any particular reason or purpose, as other things are, but are eternally, and by their very nature, beautiful, and give a pleasure of their own quite free from the itch of desire: and in this way colors can give a similar pleasure."

Socrates
(& Slobodan)


Indeed, Slobodan, but you have no idea what the old guy had in mind at the time or had perhaps been smoking or drinking.

Quotations such as this are just props that hold up the ship before it hits the tallow (or bananas in India) and slides down into the water, rustllng and rumbling its dusty heaps of chains behind it...

However, Socyboy aside, none of these replies answer Oscar's legitimate question beyond admitting that they, the responders, saw no point either, but dug the thing anyway or simply felt defensive.

Which is cool, but why not just admit that in the first place? Hell, I like the idea too, but don't rate it as anything constructive or creative in the slightest: it just existed. As do so many of my own shots, too, which is one reason that I feel amateur photography is a bit on doubtful ground: there is no brief, no requirement to meet, and thus no planning or working towards a definite result without which goal, anything goes. even if perhaps it were often better that it remain not done. Do you see what I mean? When everything is open season, there is no season.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: GrahamBy on January 26, 2018, 07:27:56 am
For me it's an abstract inspired by Canola. The irony is that I started to "get" Rothko when his paintings started to suggest themselves as abstracts of landscapes: that just seems to be what vibrated in my head one day. So this is pretty much exactly the sort of landscape that Rothko could have been abstracting (if he hung the result upside down).

Doesn't matter, the colours are pretty, the texture is interesting, that's enough for me. I'd take it any day over one of those melodramatic sunset pics of purples and oranges  in a drug-fueled sky-orgy.

(Edit: added the forgotten words "of landscapes", without which the first para made little sense. Sorry).
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 26, 2018, 07:48:52 am

...However, Socyboy aside, none of these replies answer Oscar's legitimate question beyond admitting that they, the responders, saw no point either, but dug the thing anyway or simply felt defensive...

Rob, I could write a whole essay, perhaps even a book, about why such images work and what’s the point, but... 1. I lack your eloquence 2. am too lazy. That's why I am a photographer, not a writer. 1000 words, etc.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 26, 2018, 08:02:02 am
The notion that every photograph needs a "point" is vastly overrated. If I feel an emotional connection with a photo, that's enough for me.

The canpla field is a fine, minimalist image, with echoes of both Rothko and BobDavid, IMHO.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 26, 2018, 08:10:05 am
Perhaps this might help:

https://legacybox.com/blogs/analog/your-brain-colors-how-we-interoperate-them
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 26, 2018, 09:00:54 am
For me it's an abstract inspired by Canola. The irony is that I started to "get" Rothko when his paintings started to suggest themselves as abstracts: that just seems to be what vibrated in my head one day. So this is pretty much exactly the sort of landscape that Rothko could have been abstracting (if he hung the result upside down).

Doesn't matter, the colours are pretty, the texture is interesting, that's enough for me. I'd take it any day over one of those melodramatic sunset pics of purples and oranges  in a drug-fueled sky-orgy.

I catch your drift, but would you then extend that sense of acceptance or, even, recognition of something beyond the obviously obvious to that photographer (whose name I can't remember) but whose oeuvre appears to be an interminable series of almost identical images of the sea and sky doing absolutely nothing at all beyond changing colour? Of course, whether it is really a series of different camera exposures or just Photoshop manipulation of a single exposure - which would have saved a lot of walking and, probably, carbon footprinting to boot - I have no way of knowing. Not that it would make the slightest noticeable difference to the artwork.

But it clearly brings me back to where I began with this thing, which is that with people/HOM shots, at least there is a lot to appreciate and discuss - apart from whether or not the images may be ethical.

With landscape/seascape et al. one is limited to a variation of +1, +2 or 0. There's nowhere constructive to take it because it all boils down to a ready appreciation or otherwise of an ethic that depends on the provisions of God and not Man. As we all realise, God is bountiful, so what else did such a photographer expect beyond the cloning of His work? And no, I am not being disrespectful towards God. I have my private interpretation and understanding of Him and I doubt it corresponds a heap with the standard, homogenized versions around. I was never much of a team player in my life or in my work; was that, is that easy? Not particularly, but the alternative would have been something far more stressful and damaging for me to contemplate.

Regarding the over-fuelled people of this world: they too have their place and market and bear the scars that come with it, whether they are aware of them or not. We can't escape what we are. Most of us who have worked this seam for a living realise, in the end, that we have been making the same image - or variations of it - since day 1. I am sure that as pros we are aware of it more early than are amateurs by the inevitable fact that we produce just so much damned evidence by which to condemn ourselves.

Perhaps that's the basis of style.

Rob
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 26, 2018, 10:11:12 am
As for HOM, you can see subtle evidence in the grooved patterns in the field, rising left to right slightly. So I will add subtlety to simplicity, complementarity, and juxtaposition in one of my previous responses to the question, what is the point? But, Rob, I think there is a place for photographing the bountiful provisions of God just like there's a place for street photography where snaps may depend on pure chance. Why would we want one genre of image making? That may not be what you are saying, however. Fashion photography may be more like painting because of the creative effort that goes into achieving a satisfactory let alone beautiful result. I question your premise, if I understand it, that only the HOM is worthwhile and all else is mere cloning.

I remember a recent exchange with Russ and his quoting Ecclesiastes, "All is vanity," and your comment above about "making the same image" and how that is somehow condemning of our efforts. Not trying to put words in your mouth, but I think of my mother who made her living as an oil painter for more than thirty years. She would do seascapes with variation after variation until she moved on to landscapes  :o  or whatever and then back again. Each was unique, each a variation on a theme and this is common with painters, but is that a futile effort? I think not for it may be the progression of subtle differences "seen" by the artist that tells a more interesting story. Formula novels may be predictable, but I still read them.

I wrote a blog article (Why take a photograph? (https://davideckelsphotography.blogspot.com/2014/02/why-take-photograph.html)) about a posting by Russ, The Tracks. Nothing new under the sun, but it is still worthwhile sitting around the campfire listening to the same story even if told differently. I just finished "The Pleasure of Finding Things Out" by Richard Feynman and in one of the vignettes he discusses his observations that people think differently even with the seemingly simplest of things, for example, counting. Some compute a mental rhythm while others see a visual image (read the book). But the point is that we all see internally (mentally) differently and there's no guarantee we will "see" the same thing (image, poem, prose, etc) the exact same way the next time we "see" it. I think this may make revisiting old stories, in this case images, meaningful.

By the way, I knew when I took this image that it had probably already been done, but that realization did not diminish my joy at discovering it for myself.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: RSL on January 26, 2018, 11:13:31 am
I guess everybody on LuLa knows I'd prefer being in St.Augustine on St. George street shooting people. But to emphasize what David just said, here's a picture. I have 53 shots of this tree in my Lightroom catalog. I've shot it in all seasons and at all times of day. There's a 17 x 22 copy of one of the views hanging in my bedroom. The world is full of things that somehow put you in touch with the music of Parnassus. This is one of them. Unfortunately, somebody bought the lot across the river, cut the trees at the right end of the picture, and put a hideous shed just about where this picture ends. What once was music has become more like rap.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 26, 2018, 12:42:32 pm
As for HOM, you can see subtle evidence in the grooved patterns in the field, rising left to right slightly. So I will add subtlety to simplicity, complementarity, and juxtaposition in one of my previous responses to the question, what is the point? But, Rob, I think there is a place for photographing the bountiful provisions of God just like there's a place for street photography where snaps may depend on pure chance. Why would we want one genre of image making? That may not be what you are saying, however. Fashion photography may be more like painting because of the creative effort that goes into achieving a satisfactory let alone beautiful result. I question your premise, if I understand it, that only the HOM is worthwhile and all else is mere cloning.

I remember a recent exchange with Russ and his quoting Ecclesiastes, "All is vanity," and your comment above about "making the same image" and how that is somehow condemning of our efforts. Not trying to put words in your mouth, but I think of my mother who made her living as an oil painter for more than thirty years. She would do seascapes with variation after variation until she moved on to landscapes  :o  or whatever and then back again. Each was unique, each a variation on a theme and this is common with painters, but is that a futile effort? I think not for it may be the progression of subtle differences "seen" by the artist that tells a more interesting story. Formula novels may be predictable, but I still read them.

I wrote a blog article (Why take a photograph? (https://davideckelsphotography.blogspot.com/2014/02/why-take-photograph.html)) about a posting by Russ, The Tracks. Nothing new under the sun, but it is still worthwhile sitting around the campfire listening to the same story even if told differently. I just finished "The Pleasure of Finding Things Out" by Richard Feynman and in one of the vignettes he discusses his observations that people think differently even with the seemingly simplest of things, for example, counting. Some compute a mental rhythm while others see a visual image (read the book). But the point is that we all see internally (mentally) differently and there's no guarantee we will "see" the same thing (image, poem, prose, etc) the exact same way the next time we "see" it. I think this may make revisiting old stories, in this case images, meaningful.

By the way, I knew when I took this image that it had probably already been done, but that realization did not diminish my joy at discovering it for myself.



David,

First of all, I am not suggesting but a single photographic culture; there are and can be many. My quibble is an extension of Oscar's question, which is regarding the point of a specific image. I suppose it comes down to the question of motivation; you more or less explain that yourself, but motivation to do something does not confer point intrinsic within the work. It just denotes one wants to do something, even if for no specific reason than it's there and so is the desire. Much of life is like that; it's what drives the leisure market.

Fashion photography is too wide to classify with an easy categorisation. Much of what I shot was to shift frocks from factory to shops. Another option, different emphasis, was to shift stock from retail outlet to private home. Each had its own requirements and audience, and from my luck of the draw, the second outlet was the more rewarding because, essentially, it had more to do with selling the image of a shop than a particular garment. If you found a client with belief in you, that meant you could build a relationship that provided vital continuity; failure to build a relationship would mean one soon ran out of possible options. It was, in my day, a small, incestuous world where fibs, envy and plotting ruled. No wonder stock provided such a great lure which, in the end, was killed off along with so much else that allowed photography to be a career, as different to just a passing phase, a second string in someone's life.

The creative effort in fashion has little in common with painting. Fashion is about creating something that doesn't really ever exist, even when you snap it. This may seem impossible, but it is true. By the time you and your girl have made the shot, you will never again be able to return to where you were. It is a fleeting moment at best, and even then, just an illusion, a trick in its own right that remains beyond both of you. It's why I always dreaded working a shot with more than one model in it. Getting the stars in line once is cool; wanting them to align in duplicate is rocket science. Painting is different because it is done over a fairly long time, compared with a people snap. Also, unless one is trying to be a photographer with a brush, the result is wide open to the degree it resembled whatever set it in motion.

But to return to that specific shot: I can understand you when you say that you find joy in discovering something new to you, whether or not it has been done before; I get the same buzz aping the New York school by shooting reflections in windows, but only when there is human presence in the shot does it really work for me. The rest of the time it's just abstraction at best, or abject failure. So, when I think it works, what's my supposed point? The answer, for me, is in the caption; and of course, that may only be obvious to me because I felt driven to shoot the thing. Now and again I start out with caption in mind and magically, I run into something that fits the bill. That is the exception, though, and at once, the appeal: I enjoy the winging it aspects of my sort of non-aggressive street. Frankly, it's how I did everything in photography and at once illustrates why I was not mad about team-playing and having people hanging about watching and throwing in their sixpenny bits. Maybe that's the real genesis of Without Prejudice: simply an extension of my own way.

Rob
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 26, 2018, 01:37:34 pm
I can understand you when you say that you find joy in discovering something new to you, whether or not it has been done before; I get the same buzz aping the New York school by shooting reflections in windows, but only when there is human presence in the shot does it really work for me.
Emphasis mine. Rob, thanks for clarifying for me;  I think I get what you are saying, which takes me to the quote above and discussions we've had in the past as to why take a photo: It is, in the end, for me as Peter concludes in his post just now. I also think my motivation or rather what I am learning to take out of my photography is that it's for me. I could post on 500px and lust after a thousand likes, or seek gallery representation, certainly not money (!), but ultimately satisfaction must come from within and I think that has been a consistent message from you and many others here in LuLa land. I very much appreciate that message and the more I assimilate it I think the stronger my photography becomes, or rather, I should say my satisfaction with it grows.

But we also have here something that is unique in my experience, to others a cliche perhaps ;) and that is the ability to post experimental images (for the poster at least) and learn from the reactions and discussions we have, such as the one we are engaged with now. Of course, this is probably off topic.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 26, 2018, 05:19:42 pm
Emphasis mine. Rob, thanks for clarifying for me;  I think I get what you are saying, which takes me to the quote above and discussions we've had in the past as to why take a photo: It is, in the end, for me as Peter concludes in his post just now. I also think my motivation or rather what I am learning to take out of my photography is that it's for me. I could post on 500px and lust after a thousand likes, or seek gallery representation, certainly not money (!), but ultimately satisfaction must come from within and I think that has been a consistent message from you and many others here in LuLa land. I very much appreciate that message and the more I assimilate it I think the stronger my photography becomes, or rather, I should say my satisfaction with it grows.

But we also have here something that is unique in my experience, to others a cliche perhaps ;) and that is the ability to post experimental images (for the poster at least) and learn from the reactions and discussions we have, such as the one we are engaged with now. Of course, this is probably off topic.


Yes, it really does boil down to the necessity of doing it for oneself. Strangely enough, that may take some time for people to realise truthfully rather than in some form of mere lip service to an idea or an ideal, depending on how one views it, and I rather suspect that some pros never do realise this aspect of their life at all, or otherwise, how can some continue doing what they do without going crazy? I have never understood the photographer for whom a photographic career has been just a means to earning a crust. There are far easier and more financially rewarding jobs out there to pursue than the making of images. I may be mistaken, but I think that painters are seldom found in this strange position: either you love the thing so much there is no choice but to do it 100% or you become a weekend artist, which is perfectly fine too, and provides an interest that does not depend on making it pay its way.

Yes, it is one of the strengths of LuLa that we are able to post pictures freely, and as great that we can do so and, should we wish, discuss without the same rancour that politics encourages. The Internet does have some positive aspects!
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 26, 2018, 06:01:32 pm

Yes, it really does boil down to the necessity of doing it for oneself... Yes, it is one of the strengths of LuLa that we are able to post pictures freely, and as great that we can do so and, should we wish, discuss without the same rancour that politics encourages. The Internet does have some positive aspects!
Amen, brother!
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 26, 2018, 06:10:37 pm
... I'd take it any day over one of those melodramatic sunset pics of purples and oranges  in a drug-fueled sky-orgy....

(https://media3.giphy.com/media/3oEjHO6kED0gWOSpCU/200_s.gif)

(https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7360/13974484909_9458cdb9b3_c.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/nhSTuZ)
Parisian Sky (https://flic.kr/p/nhSTuZ) by Slobodan Blagojevic (https://www.flickr.com/photos/slobodan_blagojevic/), on Flickr
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: degrub on January 26, 2018, 07:25:54 pm
Naaah....that's mellow yellow....
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 27, 2018, 04:16:46 am
So there you are: through photography we have caused climate change and the flooding of the Seine! Any day now La Gioconda will be found floating, face down, in a little black backwater where the ghosts of HC-B and Willy Ronis will be clicking silently away as she drifts from old tyre to empty, grease-caked drum, the stray dog sniffing the air as if aware of something not quite normal before raising his right hind leg and expressiing his opinion just like anybody else. The elders at Adobe will smile, and sign another virtual contract.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: armand on January 27, 2018, 06:46:28 pm
I like it quite a lot, the colors are just right. Can I express why I like it? Maybe but I'm not trained for it and it will take me too much effort and risk not being understood anyway. So, I'll just keep enjoying it and maybe some day I'll have the words, if only to figure out how can I create something to replicate the same feeling.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 27, 2018, 06:59:51 pm
I like it quite a lot, the colors are just right. Can I express why I like it? Maybe but I'm not trained for it and it will take me too much effort and risk not being understood anyway. So, I'll just keep enjoying it and maybe some day I'll have the words, if only to figure out how can I create something to replicate the same feeling.
I do too, Armand, I think Slobodan won an award with this one.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 27, 2018, 07:17:53 pm
I do too, Armand, I think Slobodan one won an award with this one.

I think Armand is referring to your OP photograph :)

Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: armand on January 27, 2018, 10:10:44 pm
I think Armand is referring to your OP photograph :)

Sorry Slobodan but you are right  :D, even as your photo is not too shabby, I was referring to the initial photo.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: tom b on January 28, 2018, 12:01:20 am
Slightly left of field, slightly colourful. The alternative name for canola is rapeseed or its shortened name rape.

So we could have the title – Rape in the fields.  :)

Cheers,

Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 28, 2018, 04:23:23 am
Slightly left of field, slightly colourful. The alternative name for canola is rapeseed or its shortened name rape.

So we could have the title – Rape in the fields.  :)

Cheers,

Attempted rape in the fields.

As David suggested, the model ran far too fast: it's a proven fact that a woman with her skirt up around her waist runs faster than any man with his trousers around his ankles.

Fake news, bro'.

Rob
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 28, 2018, 11:42:18 am
I like it quite a lot, the colors are just right. Can I express why I like it? Maybe but I'm not trained for it and it will take me too much effort and risk not being understood anyway. So, I'll just keep enjoying it and maybe some day I'll have the words, if only to figure out how can I create something to replicate the same feeling.
Thank you, Armand, sorry for my confusion.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on January 28, 2018, 01:44:47 pm
The notion that every photograph needs a "point" is vastly overrated. If I feel an emotional connection with a photo, that's enough for me.

Agreed. It has a pleasing appearance. It's enjoyable to look at. It doesn't have to "say" anything, or be a medium for David to say anything. It just is.

We have an awful lot of that stuff over here, too. We need to rewrite the song: "On England's yellow and pleasant land".

Jeremy
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on January 28, 2018, 01:51:56 pm
The notion that every photograph needs a "point" is vastly overrated. If I feel an emotional connection with a photo, that's enough for me.

Eric's remark above should be printed large, laminated, and framed (matting optional).

Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 28, 2018, 02:22:02 pm
The notion that every photograph needs a "point" is vastly overrated. If I feel an emotional connection with a photo, that's enough for me.

The canpla field is a fine, minimalist image, with echoes of both Rothko and BobDavid, IMHO.

"If I feel an emotional connection with a photo, that's enough for me."

And of course, that's its point. But, if one feels nothing...
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 28, 2018, 02:40:52 pm
And of course, that's its point. But, if one feels nothing...

One way to make a point... impossible not to feel:

(http://americanupbeat.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/04/Perfectly-Timed-Photos-15.jpg)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 28, 2018, 03:15:44 pm
I think this is how Rob feels about my photo! ;)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: armand on January 28, 2018, 04:30:36 pm
Feeling something is better than nothing.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 28, 2018, 04:47:13 pm
I think this is how Rob feels about my photo! ;)

Now, don't make it personal! You'll get us both kicked out!

Guess that guy felt a bit of a prick, what with it being in public an' all... it's what you get playing around with animals - I always root for the bull. If folks left them alone they would return the compliment.

Rob
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: 32BT on January 28, 2018, 05:20:42 pm
I guess it's time to write down a more thoughtful response.

Let me first state, for the record, that my original question regarding a point was a genuine question.

Clearly, an image submitted for critique by necessity must have a purpose. I have no idea what constructive criticism could be offered for an image that is meant to exist in its own right, that exist to excite some viewers but not others indiscriminately. We are here because we are all at least somewhat versed in visual arts appreciation, and submitting images with no purpose could well be considered offensive if you'd really think about it. Obviously, some people offer up images for critique where they really are looking for praise. We've talked about that before. That probably is one of the more obvious examples of the gap between hope and expectation, also known as "reality". I don't think David's submissions generally belong in that category though.

However, here's my problem with this image:

Suppose we were on a music forum instead of a photography forum, with a section where you can present a musical piece for criticism. You submit (part of) a composition and people can respond with suggestions, recommendations, or perhaps by simply sharing how they like the result. What then would be the equivalent of this image?

Well, this image, to me, is like hitting a C major chord on a Bosendorfer Concert Grand piano, with a jackhammer...

... and then asking us for critique.

WTF do you want to know? Obviously it harmonises, the chord is pretty much fundamental to our western tonal system. Does hitting it with a jackhammer suddenly turn it into a composition of any (shareable) relevance?

Personally I believe it turns sound into flat noise. It turns an already bland image into surface distribution, a digital abstraction like a flag with impossible colors, where at least the flag has symbolism associated with it. The image, as far as I'm concerned, becomes a bit of a digital travesty. And yes, that was dismissive. I consider myself a relatively open minded person however, so let's for a moment set our prejudices aside. Here is another genuine question:

How did you come to choose the aspect ratio and orientation, and why do you believe that particular aspect ratio best supports your intended "focus on simplicity, complementarity, and juxtaposition"?



PS. note that this is nothing personal to you David, this is particularly an answer to the other respondents regarding "the point of an image".


 








Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 28, 2018, 07:12:01 pm
Thanks for the clarification, Oscar. I personally took your original question as genuine and fair. I don't fully get your simile, however, but to summarize, not trivialize, you don't like the image, and beyond that, you are in some sense even insulted by it. That's a strong negative reaction, which I can partially comprehend. You are right in that when I post here, it is not for praise, it is for genuine C&C, otherwise what is the point? Praise can be dismissive as well. But I think I am missing something regarding the intensity of your response, the jackhammer analogy notwithstanding. And maybe that's enough. Dismissive IYHO is OK with me.

I don't know how to answer your last question. Brandtb has shared with me regarding what framing has to communicate, both in architecture and photography. He has formal training whereas I don't. The AR was SOOC and I did not think about it beyond that; interesting assumption on my part. Interesting that some folks find the image so very pleasing and other the very opposite. Beyond that, it was an experiment that produced some very interesting results that I have yet to internalize.

I will see if others have something more to add, but I thank you for the time you obviously spent thinking about this discussion, from which I am learning a lot.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 28, 2018, 08:23:03 pm
... Clearly, an image submitted for critique by necessity must have a purpose... submitting images with no purpose could well be considered offensive...

Oscar, when someone doesn't see a point or purpose, it doesn't mean there is none. It only means some people see it, others don't. Not everyone appreciates Picasso or Rothko.

Art provokes emotions
(there you go, my contribution to the contest for the shortest artist statement)

 The OP image's "purpose" is to communicate what David felt to a broader audience and see if it resonates with them. It did, for a number of us. I guess many on this thread skipped the link I provided (how our brains interpret colors), so for their benefit, I will quote the intro (bold mine):

Quote
Color is much more than a bundle of hues, pigments and shades. It’s not only how we see the world, it’s how we feel about the world around us. Whether you know it or not, your mind associates different emotions and thoughts with every color you see. That means every day – every color you see – your mind is taking in all the feels, probably without you even being aware of it.

 
THE COLOR TRIFECTA

Color has a special impact on the brain, which leads to you landing somewhere on the extensive feeling spectrum. Whether you’re feeling anxious, happy, sad, calm or angry, color impacts our physiology in three main ways:

Psychologically – where we base color on personal experiences

Symbolically – where we associate colors with a specific object (the sky is blue)

Culturally –  where society has defined how we are supposed to view colors (black at a funeral)

 

What I see/feel in the OP image is a harmony. Harmony achieved through the combination of colors that work well together and each invokes positive emotions. Harmony achieved by the horizon in the middle, suggesting balance.

Furthermore, beyond colors, there are elements that affect us similarly (i.e., psychologically, symbolically, and culturally): the sky and field. Harmony again: cloudless sky, warm day, gentle breeze through the crops, peace and quiet. For city dwellers, who rarely venture beyond the concrete jungle, those things might mean little. For anyone who spent some time near or in the fields, they mean a lot.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: John R on January 28, 2018, 10:21:23 pm
Excellent contribution Slobodan. I dare say, of late, David is not only 'experimenting', but feeling the colours and seeing the way images can be constructed as shapes and colours, not just things as we know them. Go David, Go!

JR
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Ray on January 28, 2018, 10:25:11 pm
In answer to Oscar's question, here's what I think was the purpose of the image.

David Eckels happens to know the farmer who planted the canola seeds. The farmer, after planting the canola crop, decided to go on an extended holiday and was a bit worried whether the crop would flourish because he wasn't sure if the field was getting enough rain.

So the farmer phoned David, expressing his worries about the canola crop, and David responded by taking a photo of the field of canola, and emailed the image to the farmer, who was very pleased to see that everything was okay.

David was so inspired by the farmer's praise of his shot, he decided to share it on Luminous Landscape.  ;D
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 28, 2018, 11:34:49 pm
Surely one possible measure of the "success" of an image on LuLa might be the number of responses it gets. By that measure, David's shot is certainly a winner. I am quite sure none of my photos have ever gotten anywhere close to 50 responses! 

-Eric
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: tom b on January 29, 2018, 12:14:11 am
Nobody blinked at my canola photo (http://forum.luminous-landscape.com/index.php?topic=40005.msg592327#msg592327).

Maybe it was because it was in trees thread????

Cheers,
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 29, 2018, 01:15:09 am
Nobody blinked at my canola photo (http://forum.luminous-landscape.com/index.php?topic=40005.msg592327#msg592327).

That was a nice photo, Tom.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: GrahamBy on January 29, 2018, 04:07:27 am
Well, this image, to me, is like hitting a C major chord on a Bosendorfer Concert Grand piano, with a jackhammer...

... and then asking us for critique.


One could reasonably disagree about the jack-hammer, which I would expect to ruin the piano and leave us all slightly deafened.

However, yes, hitting a single chord and listening to all the decay modes, while feeling the subjective reaction, yes... but that is interesting to me. That is the whole idea of minimalism as I internalise it, to find what is the most elementale part of a composition which acts on my emotional response.

I have seen the version one step beyond, a sheet of masonite painted an almost uniform red. It didn't work (although it did for whoever wrote the catalogue entry, it seems). This one does. Different (brush) strokes. Just as I don't much like sky-orgies (even relatively tasteful ones from Slobodan) while others pay good money for manipulated shots of the Grand Canyon.

Criticism can be both in width (What proportion of people like it? Who are they?) as much as depth (paragraphs about references to earlier work, inspiration from nature, harking back to childhood...).

Then again, your jack-hammer image is quite powerful: I can imagine a TV shrink furrowing his brow, putting one arm of his glasses between his teeth and saying
"Jack-hammer... hmm. Maybe we could explore that idea?"
:)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 29, 2018, 05:57:13 am
It is not the image that elicited the response. The response was to Oscar's question. Without that gentle challenge the response would have consisted (my guess) of perhaps two or three replies of the +1 variety.

It's one of the attractions to me of LuLa that there exists a readership that is interested enough to comment on photographs, and to make some too. Comment is always a tricky thing in which to engage, because even despite perhaps not personally having met fellow scribes, one feels them to be friends, and the last thing one desires is to distance them and offend them in any way.

It rapidy becomes obvious, in any grouping, that there are those who say yes to everything and those who say no, and those who remain mute. If you look at the numbers for LuLa then it's difficult to escape the view that the majority looks, perhaps reads and then just moves on to something else. The result is that those who communicate get to understand one another quite well, and if they also post images, their visual sense is subconsciously registered, stored and used as barometer of the value of their contributions.  Better yet, if they also display a website address, a far more focussed sense of what they are about can be had which, sometimes, appears to be at loggerheads with their LuLa presence.

And what does the above indicate? Just that the more we think we understand someone, the less, in fact, we realise that we do, because I believe that we are all such a mess of contradictions that we fail really to know who the hell we are ourselves. Maybe we are everybody and anything and everything, as well as nobody at all.

Slobodan refers to the most brief "artist's statement": mine is even more brief than the quoted one, and so I'm sorry (no, I'm not!), but I trump that!

On the more serious aspect of his post, though, on the theoretical qualities of colour etc. my feeling is - crap! That is all posturing after the event. It's the equivalent of selling snake oil to the willing; the difference between he who would intellectualise everything and he who just gets up off his ass and does it well anyway: Vincent, anyone? The cavemen? You can read every book on theoretical art and the mechanics of vision ever published and if you couldn't create art before, you will still be unable when your beard has got you into Zee Zee Tops. It's inborn, as is the feeling, the understanding of what you see which is, back to the same thing, what you are.

Oscar enjoys musical equivalents: I have music on almost all day long, enjoy it tremendously and remember so many different phases of it in popular culture, but none of that lets me play a single instrument (yes, I have tried) or even sing a single song. The visual arts are no different: you have it or you do not; if you have it nobody needs tell you what it is, and the most they can do for you is show you the mechanics as best they can, provide you with the knowledge of the tools, not of what you will use them to accomplish or how. In fact, I always feel that the less anyone else tries to influence you as a youth, the better off you are for it. When you are young, impressionable and open you find your own thing where it's reflected within the work of others, it helps you crystalise your ideas a little bit. Take Leiter: I met his world in around '59 in the pages of Popular Photography Annual (or perhaps the Color one; they were separate publications) and he thrilled me. I never forgot his pictures of the model through the windows of the carriage. But after that annual, he vanished from my sight. I sometimes wondered what became of him, and the amazing thing is this: in my late seventies I discovered his new book, published just after he died. Suddenly, he became the gallerist's darling (a gallery helped get the last book produced) and I saw again the work that had moved me so long ago. Today, a local, hick-town version is probably what I do myself. So, do I feel I want to be a Leiter clone? No, but I do accept that he was the first photographer to let me see what I truly liked, apart from fashion. It was not ever on my list of options in my work, but today, it is, and that gives me something to develop despite the fact that I have no Soames of my own; no New York city with its teaming life. (Ask Russ how that feels!)  But hey, what did I discover: he was far from alone or a pioneer; there was an entire school of New York photographers shooting different yet similar versions of street back in the 40s and 50s. Mostly they used black/white, but not always. I recently bought the Louis Faurer book (Steidl) hoping to find his beautiful fashion work, but it was only his street photography. Only, but very good, and so similar to Leiter's. There is even a couple of pictures of Robert Frnk, just for good measure. I never thought of Frank as a wearer of pinstripe suits, but there you are. In one, he reminds me of Bob Dylan.

So yeah, discussion about one image is often discusion about all images, which is quite enjoyable when you are not actually making any at the time.

Which is probably the point of the above.

;-)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on January 29, 2018, 07:33:46 am
The point of color theory is not to make you an artist, but to help explain how we perceive things thanks to colors. It helps explain why people would pay millions for a single color, or absence of it.

But I guess, Rob, that your “shortest ever” artist statement still remains - crap?  ;)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 29, 2018, 08:37:00 am
The point of color theory is not to make you an artist, but to help explain how we perceive things thanks to colors. It helps explain why people would pay millions for a single color, or absence of it.

But I guess, Rob, that your “shortest ever” artist statement still remains - crap?
  ;)


No, that's merely a critique. My shortest, and most honest A.S., as for Claudius, would be: I. However, in the quest for modesty, I simply use WYSIWYG.

But hey, thanks for the illustration: proves exactly what I was saying. Further, it reveals the cynical, barren nakedness of an entire middle-man-based industry.

That industry explains why some spend millions on rubbish: they are buyers of both the oil of asp as of risky financial hedge against currency. Think about Bitcoin... that strikes me as ultimately no less chancy than zillions in a bucket of paint. Or even a fade-prone photograph.

;-)

Rob
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: tom b on January 29, 2018, 09:13:34 am
Colour theory, the compliment of yellow is purple.

In NSW when canola is in bloom, Paterson's curse, a purple flower is also in bloom. It is a weed that is poisonous to horses but with canola makes great photos (https://www.google.com.au/search?q=paterson%27s+curse+canola&safe=active&rlz=1C5CHFA_enAU695AU695&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwizjbSerP3YAhWGxLwKHaJQCXMQ_AUICigB&biw=1366&bih=768).

Unknown to me, when it blooms it is also tiger snake breeding season, luckily I survived walking through the weed in a national park next to a river.

Lucky me,
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on January 29, 2018, 09:19:00 am
At the risk of standing up in the middle of a crossfire and getting my head shot off, if artists can paint it, why can't a photographer snap it if they recognize it as a subject?

Ray, how did you know?  ;D
JR, gracias.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on January 29, 2018, 03:04:46 pm
At the risk of standing up in the middle of a crossfire and getting my head shot off, if artists can paint it, why can't a photographer snap it if they recognize it as a subject?

Ray, how did you know?  ;D
JR, gracias.


They can and very often have; that's part of the problem.

Just like window reflections.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on February 01, 2018, 01:17:40 pm
I've been pondering your last reply, Rob, for a couple of days now. Are you saying that window reflections are not worth shooting? Or that they are cliches? Or something else entirely?
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on February 01, 2018, 02:38:09 pm
I've been pondering your last reply, Rob, for a couple of days now. Are you saying that window reflections are not worth shooting? Or that they are cliches? Or something else entirely?

David,

I am pointing out that my own current interest in the genre of windows and reflections is nothing new at all, that even my idea that it had pretty much originated with Saul Leiter turned out to be flawed; as he was doing so well, others were also beavering away doing similar things. Perhaps the truth is that there are only so many genres widely available, freely, which was as important to those early photographers of the NY School as it is to me! I say widely, but that's also a stretch, because unless one lives in a town large enough to boast busy pavements/thoroughfares, then the raw material will be absent. Yes, some smaller shops will still have glass frontages, but for me, as for those pioneers, it's the human presence that makes atmosphere - largely - and that's hard to crack in towns and countries where everything shuts down at mealtimes as folks vanish into homes or little restaurants, leaving empty streets between 1pm and 4.30pm at least.

Cliche? Oh yes, but even within cliche there are things that work and others that simply pay lip service to genre and are never going to rate highly even within the photographer's own estimation. But hey, if it's purely for personal satisfaction, there is little else that will really concern the shooter. That's why I go back for more when I feel mentally up to travelling that same route again.

I think that for myself, at the bottom of it all lies this urge to keep creating something if only because it's about all one can do as amateur: without assignment, it's tough to find reason or motivation because the blank wall facing one is more than a little bit daunting! The assignment offers challenges and problems to overcome, but if at least offers direction towards something. I suppose that's the reason for things like Ms Coke, too: just an idea to try and illustrate in yet another manner.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: David Eckels on February 01, 2018, 03:50:33 pm
I suppose that's the reason for things like Ms Coke, too: just an idea to try and illustrate in yet another manner.
And therein lies the fun! I enjoy seeing your explorations.
But hey, if it's purely for personal satisfaction,... at the bottom of it all lies this urge to keep creating something.
Very well said, Rob, all of it. And this is why your "Without Prejudice" thread is so important. No critiques for the most part, but if they strike a chord with someone somewhere, there is opportunity for acknowledgement that an image has done so. I am starting to see that the desire for critiques implies that there is some right or wrong way to approach, capture, or render an image. I was not aware of that (my) assumption until now. Always good to learn something new. Thanks for teaching.
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on February 01, 2018, 05:34:07 pm
And therein lies the fun! I enjoy seeing your explorations.Very well said, Rob, all of it. And this is why your "Without Prejudice" thread is so important. No critiques for the most part, but if they strike a chord with someone somewhere, there is opportunity for acknowledgement that an image has done so. I am starting to see that the desire for critiques implies that there is some right or wrong way to approach, capture, or render an image. I was not aware of that (my) assumption until now. Always good to learn something new. Thanks for teaching.


David,

Not sure about teaching anything; I expect that people just come to the conclusion that, in the end, they are making pictures for themselves and that they are, in some ways, fortunate that's how it is because of the freedom it implies.

I have often commented that photography strikes me as one of those areas where the difficult thing for the neophyte is how to do something unless somebody is there to show him how it works. I think that today, with digital, making an exposure is very simple, but the afterwork anything but. That's where a helping hand is very useful and will save lots of time and frustration. One difficulty that I found, time after time, was that people helping out took too much knowledge for granted. I ended up more confused than ever.

However, that is all about camera and computer skill and precious little to do with the value or otherwise of content, where you are ultimately on your own, so why spend a long time looking for external rules, just as you suggested might be being done? But, there is just so much room for fiddling about in digital that the temptation to do so can ruin what might have been a good visual idea. It's difficult knowing when to leave a picture alone and declare it done!

:-)
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: GrahamBy on February 02, 2018, 04:46:14 am
It's difficult knowing when to leave a picture alone and declare it done!

Amen.

There is a coda to this: when people go to some sort of photography school now, the two things that are easily available for the instructors to use to fill the syllabus are:
a) Film and darkroom (justified by Art);
b) Computer manipulation.

Both are teachable skills, as opposed to making good exposures, which really requires a lot of feel and experience.
Since the school needs to look like it's teaching something, there is usually a lot of a) (art school) or b) (commercial photography oriented school). Or both. You're unlikely to get good testimonials if you spend a couple of hours on the effects of aperture, shutter speed and focal length, then say "Less is more, go shoot..."

So then, the graduate of such a school naturally wants to show off the clever things she or he learned... which don't really include "leave it alone."
Title: Re: Canola Field Fantasy
Post by: Rob C on February 02, 2018, 02:12:17 pm
Whick makes me wonder: could it be an example of dumbing up?