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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on July 14, 2017, 09:04:30 am

Title: First Rays
Post by: RSL on July 14, 2017, 09:04:30 am
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Title: Re: First Rays
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on July 14, 2017, 10:01:38 am
Very nice, Russ.
Title: Re: First Rays
Post by: David Eckels on July 14, 2017, 10:41:43 am
I love the light on the trunks.
But I have to ask, why did you frame it so? They seem crowded by the left edge of the frame to me.
Title: Re: First Rays
Post by: Rob C on July 14, 2017, 11:08:31 am
I love the light on the trunks.
But I have to ask, why did you frame it so? They seem crowded by the left edge of the frame to me.

It's to catch the large "Y" on its side; makes a nice whole. The trees form the Y's stem.

Rob C
Title: Re: First Rays
Post by: MattBurt on July 14, 2017, 11:33:37 am
Nice scene but I'd like to see less grass and more of those nice trees. Love the light on the trunks!
Title: Re: First Rays
Post by: David Eckels on July 14, 2017, 12:16:23 pm
It's to catch the large "Y" on its side; makes a nice whole. The trees form the Y's stem.
Subtle it is.
Title: Re: First Rays
Post by: Farmer on July 14, 2017, 07:04:08 pm
I love the light in this.  Simple but lovely.  A reminder that simple subjects shouldn't be overlooked for seemingly more grand ones.
Title: Re: First Rays
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on July 18, 2017, 01:24:35 am
Beautiful, Russ. I am always on the lookout (http://blog.parrikar.com/2015/01/09/palm-trees/) for these scenes.