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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: BobDavid on March 13, 2017, 03:29:34 pm

Title: The Denver Mint
Post by: BobDavid on March 13, 2017, 03:29:34 pm

I need to do some work to get my black and white mojo back.

Title: Re: The Denver Mint
Post by: RSL on March 13, 2017, 03:36:28 pm

Good shot of the mint, and I like the shadows, but I'm not thrilled about the contrail.

Title: Re: The Denver Mint
Post by: GrahamBy on March 13, 2017, 06:30:59 pm

Hah, I like the fact he managed to arrange for the contrail to be aligned with the building edge. That's real art-direction :)

Title: Re: The Denver Mint
Post by: MattBurt on March 14, 2017, 12:52:24 pm

I don't mind the contrail, I think it was well-placed.

Title: Re: The Denver Mint
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on March 14, 2017, 04:05:40 pm

As for the contrail, I'll admit I'd be tempted to clone it and put a copy on the other side, to match the other side of the roof.

But I like it as it is, probably better.

Title: Re: The Denver Mint
Post by: BobDavid on March 15, 2017, 08:54:53 am

alas, a controversial contrail